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The sun blinds you as it emerges, it rises like a yellow lollipop on the horizon.The golden sand looks like diamonds, glistening in the bright sun.

The sea crashes against the beach, shivering the shore.The sea rumbles happily,beachgoers play excitedly.

Beachgoers struggle onto the sand, loaded like camels with everything needed for the day. Wet, grainy and squishes between their toes.

The salty air feels wet and cool, a strong scent of salt, fish, baby oil, sun block and sea waft through the air.

Slimy seaweed clings onto rocks like hands of green. Little crabs burrow into the wet sand while children build sand castles.

The seagulls are small boats floating upon the sea.

Surfers glide over the rolling, rumbling, roaring waves.

Sun bathers lay scattered on towels like polka dots on the sand.